Looks fun. My personal opinion though is, why does Santa need to be involved? I see he is a "Salvation Army" Santa, but does that, or he, have anything to do with the event?
alex mclean
· 2 years ago
actually, we are having santa come on the last day of snowjam for pictures and facepainting so that's why he's on there. Plus, what's Christmas without Santa? ha ha...
inWorship
· 2 years ago
Gotcha. That makes more sense to me. I didn't see how he played into the event.
So he'll be on snowboard, right :)
James McLean
· 2 years ago
its funny to see things about snow in southern california. :) looks good though.
Jen
· 2 years ago
Isn't that you Alex?
pete
· 2 years ago
i like it! nice... simple.. clean... funny...
if i may suggest 2 things... 1. lighten the lightblue parts of the 'snowjam' header a little -- i feel like it gets lost in all that blue.
2. i think the splatter background with all the details text is tough to read. maybe give the text a bit more depth or try darkening the lightblue part to give the text a bit more "pop"
klampert
· 2 years ago
I agree with pete and want to add one more thing...get a comic book font for the balloon other than the some as the rest of the page...try www.blambot.com
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So he'll be on snowboard, right :)
if i may suggest 2 things...
1. lighten the lightblue parts of the 'snowjam' header a little -- i feel like it gets lost in all that blue.
2. i think the splatter background with all the details text is tough to read. maybe give the text a bit more depth or try darkening the lightblue part to give the text a bit more "pop"